IBNS E12 — Master Notes

Department	Notes	Preview
Color	1	Less brightness/Less Contrast + Cooler - Make it m
Edit	11	Keep the focus Mostly on Abu Amro - I also think t; Start the scene here - Start on the investigation,; Sound track missing?? - Abu Amro's mic … +8 more
Sound Design (SDZ)	3	PISTOL sfx - Cocking back the gun short have a str; PILOT SDZ; ECHOING SEQUENCE - The sounds of Fadi and differen
VFX	4	AI Gen Fadi + Sami on the road; AI GEN - OTS SHOT toward phone showing the image o; AI GEN? - The shot! The blood spatter, the agony. … +1 more
Music	1	Use pilot audio
Story	6	Start the episode with E1 S1 - From Khalid's pov… ; Link back to the cameras - We need to relink to th; Backstory (from last episode) - Fadi sketchy texti … +3 more
Flaw	2	Boom In Frame; Light in frame
Clip Edit	1	Speed ramps - Move with the flow of the scene, han

#01 01:09:38:20 Color Cream Done

Less brightness/Less Contrast + Cooler - Make it more gloomy

قلّل السطوع / قلّل الكونتراست + أبرد - خلّيه أكثر كآبة

#02 01:00:04:10 Edit Blue Done

Keep the focus Mostly on Abu Amro - I also think there is a better take for him

خلّي التركيز أكثر على أبو عمرو - بعتقد في take أحسن إله

#03 01:00:04:22 Edit Blue Done

Start the scene here - Start on the investigation, focusing firstly on the body inspection, then the police, then we but to the wide shot, see Abu amro and stay there

ابدأ المشهد هون - ابدأ بالتحقيق، أول إشي تفتيش الجثة، بعدين الشرطة، بعدين wide shot، شوف أبو عمرو وابقى عليه

#04 01:00:18:11 Edit Blue Done

Sound track missing?? - Abu Amro's mic

الصوت ناقص؟؟ - مايك أبو عمرو

#05 01:00:59:01 Edit Blue Done

Marker 1

علامة 1

#06 01:05:51:19 Edit Blue Done

MCU Panning Shot - Use the shot that is panning on their faces to open the scene, we should see their reactions/emotion before we see abo amro

لقطة MCU بانورامية - استخدم اللقطة اللي بتمسح على وجوههم لفتح المشهد، لازم نشوف ردود فعلهم قبل ما نشوف أبو عمرو

#07 01:06:22:03 Edit Blue Done

Color is off

الألوان مش مظبوطة

#08 01:08:20:21 Edit Blue Done

Cut to Counter shot - See dabour + focus shift

اقطع على الـ counter shot - شوف الدبور + تحويل فوكس

#09 01:10:00:19 Edit Blue Done

How we weave the scene + the Audio

كيف ننسج المشهد + الصوت

#10 01:11:28:00 Edit Blue Done

SLOOOOW DOOOOWN - Focus on Amro, so motion movements, suspended time, dramatic

بطّئ كثير - ركّز على عمرو، حركة بطيئة، زمن معلّق، درامي

#11 01:11:29:00 Edit Blue Done

Guy in Red - Is toooo chill, he's killing the shot

الزلمة بالأحمر - كثير relaxed، عم يخرب اللقطة

#12 01:11:34:18 Edit Blue Done

Hang the scene longer - Extended, Agonizing, time

طوّل المشهد أكثر - ممدود، مؤلم، وقت

#13 01:01:30:21 Sound Design (SDZ) Yellow Done

PISTOL sfx - Cocking back the gun short have a striking sound that echoes with the scene

مؤثر صوتي مسدس - صوت تجهيز السلاح لازم يكون قوي وبتردد مع المشهد

#14 01:02:30:11 Sound Design (SDZ) Yellow Done

PILOT SDZ

صوت الـ PILOT - تصميم صوتي

#15 01:05:11:19 Sound Design (SDZ) Yellow Done

ECHOING SEQUENCE - The sounds of Fadi and different thoughts in his head, with jump cuts and disrupted time

تسلسل الصدى - أصوات فادي وأفكار مختلفة براسه، مع قطعات سريعة وزمن مكسّر

#16 01:02:25:14 VFX Purple Done

AI Gen Fadi + Sami on the road

AI Gen - فادي + سامي على الطريق

#17 01:07:28:11 VFX Purple Done

AI GEN - OTS SHOT toward phone showing the image of OM Amro

AI Gen - لقطة OTS باتجاه التلفون تعرض صورة أم عمرو

#18 01:11:04:14 VFX Purple Done

AI GEN? - The shot! The blood spatter, the agony.

AI Gen؟ - اللقطة! رشّ الدم، العذاب. عمرو بصرخ.

#19 01:12:28:10 VFX Purple Done

USE GRABS FOR AI - Use grabs from this and bathroom scene as a reference for Fadi Gets Shot Breakdown AI GEN

استخدم grabs للـ AI - خذ grabs من هاد ومشهد الحمام كمرجع لتفصيل مشهد إطلاق النار على فادي AI Gen

#20 01:01:17:08 Music Red Done

Use pilot audio

استخدم صوت الـ pilot

#21 01:00:00:00 Story Pink Done

Start the episode with E1 S1 - From Khalid's pov… revisit the beggining

ابدأ الحلقة بمشهد E1 S1 - من وجهة نظر خالد… ارجع للبداية. جيب مشاهد كثير من خالد

#22 01:00:56:17 Story Pink Done

Link back to the cameras - We need to relink to the camera situation

اربط بموضوع الكاميرات - لازم نرجع نربط بقصة الكاميرات

#23 01:02:03:09 Story Pink Done

Backstory (from last episode) - Fadi sketchy texting should (wasn't) used, with VO of the plan + Ai gen images of Sami sneaking to get the contracts

خلفية القصة (من الحلقة الماضية) - رسائل فادي المريبة لازم تُستخدم، مع VO للخطة + صور AI لسامي وهو يتسلل للعقود

#24 01:10:16:07 Story Pink Done

Interogation Scene connect - "Lama wsilna bab el villa"

ربط مشهد التحقيق - "لما وصلنا باب الفيلا"

#25 01:10:37:17 Story Pink Done

When do you see this…?? - Directly or indirectly, maybe we place this scene divided from the car

إيمتى بتشوف هاد…؟؟ - مباشر أو غير مباشر، يمكن نحط المشهد مقسّم عن السيارة

#26 01:16:45:19 Story Pink Done

Innterogation as the key scene - Start the episode with his scene and flashback to all other scenes, weave it into the entire episode

التحقيق هو المشهد الأساسي - ابدأ الحلقة بمشهده وارجع بـ flashback لكل المشاهد الثانية، انسجه بالحلقة كلها

#27 01:07:41:18 Flaw Sand Done

Boom In Frame

البوم باين بالكادر

#28 01:13:08:23 Flaw Sand Done

Light in frame

إضاءة باينة بالكادر

#29 01:12:52:14 Clip Edit Cyan Done

Speed ramps - Move with the flow of the scene, hang some moments longer, and some faster

Speed ramps - امشي مع تدفّق المشهد، علّق بعض اللحظات أطول وبعضها أسرع

Department Summary

Less brightness/Less Contrast + Cooler - Make it more gloomy

Keep the focus Mostly on Abu Amro - I also think there is a better take for him

Start the scene here - Start on the investigation, focusing firstly on the body inspection, then the police, then we but to the wide shot, see Abu amro and stay there

Sound track missing?? - Abu Amro's mic

Marker 1

MCU Panning Shot - Use the shot that is panning on their faces to open the scene, we should see their reactions/emotion before we see abo amro

Color is off

Cut to Counter shot - See dabour + focus shift

How we weave the scene + the Audio

SLOOOOW DOOOOWN - Focus on Amro, so motion movements, suspended time, dramatic

Guy in Red - Is toooo chill, he's killing the shot

Hang the scene longer - Extended, Agonizing, time

PISTOL sfx - Cocking back the gun short have a striking sound that echoes with the scene

PILOT SDZ

ECHOING SEQUENCE - The sounds of Fadi and different thoughts in his head, with jump cuts and disrupted time

AI Gen Fadi + Sami on the road

AI GEN - OTS SHOT toward phone showing the image of OM Amro

AI GEN? - The shot! The blood spatter, the agony.

USE GRABS FOR AI - Use grabs from this and bathroom scene as a reference for Fadi Gets Shot Breakdown AI GEN

Use pilot audio

Start the episode with E1 S1 - From Khalid's pov… revisit the beggining

Link back to the cameras - We need to relink to the camera situation

Backstory (from last episode) - Fadi sketchy texting should (wasn't) used, with VO of the plan + Ai gen images of Sami sneaking to get the contracts

Interogation Scene connect - "Lama wsilna bab el villa"

When do you see this…?? - Directly or indirectly, maybe we place this scene divided from the car

Innterogation as the key scene - Start the episode with his scene and flashback to all other scenes, weave it into the entire episode

Boom In Frame

Light in frame

Speed ramps - Move with the flow of the scene, hang some moments longer, and some faster

Color

Less brightness/Less Contrast + Cooler - Make it more gloomy

Edit

Keep the focus Mostly on Abu Amro - I also think there is a better take for him

Start the scene here - Start on the investigation, focusing firstly on the body inspection, then the police, then we but to the wide shot, see Abu amro and stay there

Sound track missing?? - Abu Amro's mic

Marker 1

MCU Panning Shot - Use the shot that is panning on their faces to open the scene, we should see their reactions/emotion before we see abo amro

Color is off

Cut to Counter shot - See dabour + focus shift

How we weave the scene + the Audio

SLOOOOW DOOOOWN - Focus on Amro, so motion movements, suspended time, dramatic

Guy in Red - Is toooo chill, he's killing the shot

Hang the scene longer - Extended, Agonizing, time

Sound Design (SDZ)

PISTOL sfx - Cocking back the gun short have a striking sound that echoes with the scene

PILOT SDZ

ECHOING SEQUENCE - The sounds of Fadi and different thoughts in his head, with jump cuts and disrupted time

VFX

AI Gen Fadi + Sami on the road

AI GEN - OTS SHOT toward phone showing the image of OM Amro

AI GEN? - The shot! The blood spatter, the agony.

USE GRABS FOR AI - Use grabs from this and bathroom scene as a reference for Fadi Gets Shot Breakdown AI GEN

Music

Use pilot audio

Story

Start the episode with E1 S1 - From Khalid's pov… revisit the beggining

Link back to the cameras - We need to relink to the camera situation

Backstory (from last episode) - Fadi sketchy texting should (wasn't) used, with VO of the plan + Ai gen images of Sami sneaking to get the contracts

Interogation Scene connect - "Lama wsilna bab el villa"

When do you see this…?? - Directly or indirectly, maybe we place this scene divided from the car

Innterogation as the key scene - Start the episode with his scene and flashback to all other scenes, weave it into the entire episode

Flaw

Boom In Frame

Light in frame

Clip Edit

Speed ramps - Move with the flow of the scene, hang some moments longer, and some faster