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Post-Production Review

IBNS — Episode 12 — RCv2

Timeline: IBNS E12 RCv2 NOTES
Total Notes: 25
Generated: 2026-03-15
Frame Rate: 25fps
25
Total
1
Color
11
Edit
1
VFX
8
Story
1
Flaw
1
Clip Edit
2
Recording
0 / 25 done

Department Summary

DepartmentNotesPreview
Color1TOO WARM - I prefer the cooler look of the other s
Edit11TOO LONG - Abo amro's DX is too long… and his perf; Set normal speed - Remove speedramp, the tempo of ; ABU AMRO DX TIMING - Add Space between his lines m … +8 more
VFX1ADD SHOT ON PHONE - And Video of Sami with the gun
Story8HOW DID MAZEN KNOW - I can't justify why Mazen is ; CUT TO INTERROGATION; Cut here after 10_6 - After he climbed the stairs … +5 more
Flaw1Light in frame
Clip Edit1KEYFRAME ZOOM ON FADI - And extend the shot longer
Recording2REC AMRO CALL; REC KHALID CALL
01:00:32:12
#01 01:00:32:12 Edit Blue

TOO LONG - Abo amro's DX is too long… and his performance is weak, make it shorter & check for other takes

01:02:59:17
#02 01:02:59:17 Story Pink

HOW DID MAZEN KNOW - I can't justify why Mazen is the one making the call…

01:04:01:12
#03 01:04:01:12 Edit Blue

Set normal speed - Remove speedramp, the tempo of his head turning should be in reaction to the phone call

01:04:07:07
#04 01:04:07:07 Recording Fuchsia

REC AMRO CALL

01:05:11:14
#05 01:05:11:14 Story Pink

CUT TO INTERROGATION

01:05:56:20
#06 01:05:56:20 Edit Blue

ABU AMRO DX TIMING - Add Space between his lines make it drag longer, this shot is taking too many lines… we need to see the wide before Dabours line

01:06:21:11
#07 01:06:21:11 Edit Blue

AMRO LOOKING AT SAMI - Keep that shot

01:06:39:18
#08 01:06:39:18 Edit Blue

Overlapping DX

01:06:55:00
#09 01:06:55:00 Edit Blue

CUT TOO FAST

01:08:12:02
#10 01:08:12:02 Edit Blue

CUT TO ABO AMRO 1ST

01:08:15:08
#11 01:08:15:08 Edit Blue

JUMP CUT

01:08:31:16
#12 01:08:31:16 Edit Blue

BAD CUT…. 180 LINE BROKEN

01:08:41:24
#13 01:08:41:24 Edit Blue

A lot of chaotic Cuts in this scene - The 180 is broken a lot, and too many cuts, Watch our from breaking the 180 And same Axis cuts

01:09:12:05
#14 01:09:12:05 Color Cream

TOO WARM - I prefer the cooler look of the other shots

01:09:29:12
#15 01:09:29:12 Clip Edit Cyan

KEYFRAME ZOOM ON FADI - And extend the shot longer dragging the tension

01:17:35:21
#16 01:17:35:21 Story Pink

Cut here after 10_6 - After he climbed the stairs

01:18:30:02
#17 01:18:30:02 Story Pink

Cut Here After 10/8 - Abo Sarah Office

01:18:47:00
#18 01:18:47:00 Story Pink

STAY ON SCENE

01:18:49:16
#19 01:18:49:16 Story Pink

This Connects where?….

01:19:23:24
#20 01:19:23:24 Story Pink

Cut to Abo Sarahs office 10_8

01:21:55:22
#21 01:21:55:22 Story Pink

intercutting with hospital scene

01:22:30:12
#22 01:22:30:12 Edit Blue

GRADE LOOKS WRONG - Maybe its the Lut

01:23:00:06
#23 01:23:00:06 Flaw Sand

Light in frame

01:23:11:10
#24 01:23:11:10 Recording Fuchsia

REC KHALID CALL

01:25:24:19
#25 01:25:24:19 VFX Purple

ADD SHOT ON PHONE - And Video of Sami with the gun with Fadi in betuni -5

Color

1 note
0 / 1 done
01:09:12:05
#01 01:09:12:05 Color Cream

TOO WARM - I prefer the cooler look of the other shots

Edit

11 notes
0 / 11 done
01:00:32:12
#01 01:00:32:12 Edit Blue

TOO LONG - Abo amro's DX is too long… and his performance is weak, make it shorter & check for other takes

01:04:01:12
#02 01:04:01:12 Edit Blue

Set normal speed - Remove speedramp, the tempo of his head turning should be in reaction to the phone call

01:05:56:20
#03 01:05:56:20 Edit Blue

ABU AMRO DX TIMING - Add Space between his lines make it drag longer, this shot is taking too many lines… we need to see the wide before Dabours line

01:06:21:11
#04 01:06:21:11 Edit Blue

AMRO LOOKING AT SAMI - Keep that shot

01:06:39:18
#05 01:06:39:18 Edit Blue

Overlapping DX

01:06:55:00
#06 01:06:55:00 Edit Blue

CUT TOO FAST

01:08:12:02
#07 01:08:12:02 Edit Blue

CUT TO ABO AMRO 1ST

01:08:15:08
#08 01:08:15:08 Edit Blue

JUMP CUT

01:08:31:16
#09 01:08:31:16 Edit Blue

BAD CUT…. 180 LINE BROKEN

01:08:41:24
#10 01:08:41:24 Edit Blue

A lot of chaotic Cuts in this scene - The 180 is broken a lot, and too many cuts, Watch our from breaking the 180 And same Axis cuts

01:22:30:12
#11 01:22:30:12 Edit Blue

GRADE LOOKS WRONG - Maybe its the Lut

VFX

1 note
0 / 1 done
01:25:24:19
#01 01:25:24:19 VFX Purple

ADD SHOT ON PHONE - And Video of Sami with the gun with Fadi in betuni -5

Story

8 notes
0 / 8 done
01:02:59:17
#01 01:02:59:17 Story Pink

HOW DID MAZEN KNOW - I can't justify why Mazen is the one making the call…

01:05:11:14
#02 01:05:11:14 Story Pink

CUT TO INTERROGATION

01:17:35:21
#03 01:17:35:21 Story Pink

Cut here after 10_6 - After he climbed the stairs

01:18:30:02
#04 01:18:30:02 Story Pink

Cut Here After 10/8 - Abo Sarah Office

01:18:47:00
#05 01:18:47:00 Story Pink

STAY ON SCENE

01:18:49:16
#06 01:18:49:16 Story Pink

This Connects where?….

01:19:23:24
#07 01:19:23:24 Story Pink

Cut to Abo Sarahs office 10_8

01:21:55:22
#08 01:21:55:22 Story Pink

intercutting with hospital scene

Flaw

1 note
0 / 1 done
01:23:00:06
#01 01:23:00:06 Flaw Sand

Light in frame

Clip Edit

1 note
0 / 1 done
01:09:29:12
#01 01:09:29:12 Clip Edit Cyan

KEYFRAME ZOOM ON FADI - And extend the shot longer dragging the tension

Recording

2 notes
0 / 2 done
01:04:07:07
#01 01:04:07:07 Recording Fuchsia

REC AMRO CALL

01:23:11:10
#02 01:23:11:10 Recording Fuchsia

REC KHALID CALL